New academic paper

Dear Friends

I am in the process of writing a paper on the online model for teaching critical thinking and writing skills displayed on my Online research Network website:

I will appreciate any of your comments and any suggestions regarding articles you advise I would read etc.
Please send your comments my way.

thank you
Ania

My comments on my text

Hi Friends,

I just wanted to add that I took some shortcuts when writing this text. For example, in the Summary section, authors should attend in detail to the description of the data / evidence. However, I was a bit hurrying just to produce an example, so I took a shortcut. But this makes the Summary a bit short-changed. However, I did that also to focus more on the structure clear and not to clutter the page. 

Enjoy in any case the example and I hope it is not just a way for testing the model.
regards
Ania Lian

Developing a critical apparatus for Quality Pedagogy practice